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In the world, there are abundant varieties of animals. I disagree that a zoo has no useful purpose, because A zoo give you an opportunity to know about animals and good place for family going out.
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.because you can see real animals ,. It's difficult to get experience everyday in daily. You can watch and sometimes touch real animals.
A zoo is a good place for leaning about animals because you can see real animals. It's difficult to get experience everyday. You can watch and sometimes touch real animals.
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A zoo is good place for outings, because many children like animals. Children like characters from animals, for instance, Mickey mouse, Snoopy, and etc. There are many children who look pleasure in a zoo.
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Of course, that is not real animal ecology. Not all children like animals.
However, it's true that many children like animals and they can know about animals well rather than not go a zoo. So I disagree a zoo has no purpose.
Thank you for your answer and advice!
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I want to write essay to Hatena every day. If it's possible.I hope you check my essay when you have a free time.
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Throughout the world, there are many varieties of animals that exist. I disagree to zoos having no useful purpose because zoos give people an opportunity to know about animals and it is a perfect place for families to visit.
Zoos are good for leaning about animals, since people are allowed to see real animals very closely. This is something that is hard to experience in our daily lives. People can watch and even touch real animals.
A zoo is a perfect place for families to visit. Children love animals, and characters made from animals such as Mickey mouse and Snoopy. There are many children who look happy in zoos.
Of course, this does not mean that each and every child likes animals. However, it is true that many children do. Visiting zoos will make a change in your knowledge about animals, and there is no reason to support the idea of zoos having no useful purpose.
Thank you for your good answer and your advice, but I don't support your advice well.
Certainly I made many easy mistakes. You are right. but I didn't realize my mistakes.I did my best.That's not "easy mistakes" for me.
You don't know my English skill well.So I don't want that you compare others with me.
and if I care about my mistake well. I can't want to write a English essay, because That's very stress to me.
I hope you understand my way.bc I don't change my mind.To begin with, if I can use English perfect.I don't need any help, don't you?
Thank you and take care.
Try C&P your text to MS Word and it'll tell you simple typos and wrong punctuations.
Your text reminds me of "Flowers for Algernon" :)
OK, here I'll play the devil's advocate.
I agree on the statement that a zoo has no useful purpose, because if you want to see animals, there are far better place to do it: the internet. Visit youtube and search the name of the animal and you'll get hundreds of hits in which you might find extremely rare footage or very funny videos.
You might claim that it is not real, but then are animals in zoo real? Confined in a small space and fed by humans everyday without any risk of predator, is it real? You can see animals in the real wilderness on the net, being eaten by or eating other animals, and I think they are far more "real" than animals in zoo. Visiting zoo and constructions of zoo are waste of money.
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