I only give stars when I like a flipnote. But I can give you some advice ^^: The pv is not bad at all. But you need a little bit more concentration on the outli…

I only give stars when I like a flipnote.

But I can give you some advice ^^:
The pv is not bad at all. But you need a little bit more concentration on the outlines and the colouring. And it needs more animation, you only do the slide and tear animation. I can't help you with more animation in this song, because I don't know the English translation of the song, sorry. ^^"

That's all! っとうごﾒﾓでｺﾒﾝﾄされてました｡なんて読むのですか？

I only give stars when I like a flipnote.

うごﾒﾓの作品を気に入ったときだけ､ｽﾀｰをつけるよ｡

But I can give you some advice ^^:

ちょっと､ｱﾄﾞﾊﾞｲｽをしても良いかな ^^;

The pv is not bad at all.

作品 (PV) は､けっして悪くはない｡

But you need a little bit more concentration on the outlines and the colouring.

でも､もうちょっと､りんかく(線)とか色付けを､ていねいにやった方が良い｡

And it needs more animation, you only do the slide and tear animation.

もっと､動きをつけた方が良いかな｡ｽﾗｲﾄﾞするところと､涙を流すところにしか使ってないよね｡

I can't help you with more animation in this song, because I don't know the English translation of the song, sorry. ^^"

この歌で､もっと動きをつける方法については､これ以上のｱﾄﾞﾊﾞｲｽができない｡
だって､歌詞の英語訳が分からないから｡ごめん ^^"

That's all!

以上！

という感じかな｡
けっして､なれなれしい感じの英語では無いんだけど､彼女が 13歳らしいので､こんな感じにしてみました｡

＃ﾍﾞﾙｷﾞｰの女の子みたいだよ｡